Showing posts with label #JumpstartWriting. Show all posts
Showing posts with label #JumpstartWriting. Show all posts

Tuesday, November 22, 2022

Whatever they say, we didn't .

No matter what they said, we didn’t. Nope, no way, Jose. 

It might have looked like we did. It was summer and you know, things get out of control in summer. Those wild songs were playing. Santana. You’ve got to change your wicked ways, baby. The infectious beat, you just had to dance, shimmy the hips, chop the beat with your feet, sun pouring through the car windows, the radio blaring. We always turned it up, beat on the outside of the car doors,  bare arms through the open windows, tee-shirt sleeves rolled up, hems tied tight around our midriffs,  or left loose over bathing suits.  

We bumped over the rutted farm road, unmarked but well-known, out to the swimming hole, along the west side of the Niagara River, parking in the heat of the meadow, grasses already bent with seeds, or flattened by cars, by cows, by us dancing over to the big rocks . We’d jump off into the deep dark pool, an eddy of the main pull of the river, the one that could drag you over the falls. Yes, those Falls.

A boombox turned up as high as it could go, we’d bump and shout, we’d want to hold hands, we’d change our evil ways, plunging into the cold, jumping to the bursts of the saxophones, the wail of the guitar licks plugged straight into our brains, the cold swirling water, the hot rocks, the whir of the grasshoppers, the rising song of the cicadas measuring out the heat, the beat of the timbales, Oye como ova, mi ritmo. We’d sashay, we’d prance, we’d shimmy and shake, we’d parade, do silly jumps, dive down as far as we could.

The water was dark and cold, mysterious, a black magic of its own. It set the table for all that happened later, all the things we didn’t do, all the things it was assumed we did.

(This is a small piece written to prompts from Jumpstart Writing Workshop, November, 2022. )

Monday, March 9, 2020

Five Words: Persnickety Britches

This is a fun way to slip out from under the editor's watchful eye.  Use a method to select random words: if you are writing solo, you could find six words on page 6 of the sixth book in your stack, for instance. In our groups, everyone contributes a favorite or compelling word.  The challenge in each case is to use all of the welected words in a piece of any kind - a poem, a mini-story, something stirred up from memory.  Here's something I wrote that arose out of the five words from last Tuesday's Jumpstart in Petaluma class.

The words : britches, persnickty, authentic, tantalizing, meditative. 

The britches were tantalizing, no doubt about that, but waaaaaay off limits. Wearing them too early would imply that I was too big for them. As the littlest tyke in a long slew of siblings, I already knew that would not be a good thing.

But I yearned for them: hand-me-downs from my next oldest brother, they now hung in the closet we had once shared, left behind as he had been hurried into the waiting truck, tailpipe steaming in the pearly dawn, his clothes gathered in a rush by my oldest sister and heaped into the battered tan and brown tweed suitcase. She was not at all persnickety about what was chosen, how they were rolled, folded, squeezed. I watched, hunched on my lower bunk, quilt bunched around me. The suitcase had the authenticity of distance and the authority of loss - it gathered him up and took him away to his father's house for transgressions I couldn't yet fathom. Even now, decades later, sitting in meditation and recollection, I only feel the hole, the gap of space that he had once inhabited and which I then proceeded to fill, transgressions and all.

Jumpstart Writing Workshops ~ March

Join us for our writing fun and frolic!  Workshops meet this week at Copperfield's in Petaluma and in San Rafael -- see the deets below. 

In Jumpstart Writing, we write to several prompts to get the juices flowing and words going. This free-writing process jumps right over that cranky editor in your brain and lets you get straight down to putting words on the page. All you need is a pen or pencil and some paper. The best part? It's fun.  See this post on my blog to learn more about this process -- and check out some of the other posts for examples of what we do.

You can also investigate Marlene Cullen's blog, The Write Spot for tons of prompts, discussions of the free-writing process and links to writing resources.

Here are the logistical details -- feel free to share this email with friends who might be interested in jump-starting their writing, too.
Jumpstart Petaluma  - Copperfield's, 140 Kentucky Street, Petaluma
Monday evening, 6:30 - 8:30 pm ~ Susan Bono leads the way in March - March 2, 9, 16, 24.
Tuesday morning, 10 - noon ~ with Lakin Khan ~ March 3, 10, 17, 25, 31 
Jumpstart San Rafael - Copperfield's, 850 Fourth St, San Rafael
Wednesdays, 4:30 - 6:30 p.m.    March 11, 18, 25 with Lakin Khan

onward and upward, writing all the while,
Lakin Willard Khan. 

Saturday, February 29, 2020

JumpStart March - let's leap, let's go!

So, will March come in like a lion -- or a lamb?  This past week, I thought it would arrive tender like lamb, but boy howdy, sure did get blustery today!  Could it be roaring on March 1st?

On Weds, March 4th, I will be out of town at the AWP Conference in San Antonio, TX,  so no Jumpstart  Workshop in San Rafael that day. Alhough I will meet the Petaluma group that Tuesday morning, March 3rd - and then I'll go  vote! All the calendar and location deets are below -- or check Copperfield's  Calendar of Events here.

In Jumpstart Writing, we write to several prompts, get the juices flowing, and words going. This free-writing process jumps right over that cranky editor in your brain and lets you get right down to putting words on the page. All you need is a pen or pencil and some paper. The best part? It's fun.  See this post on my blog to learn more about this process -- and check out some of the other posts for examples of what we do.

You can also investigate Marlene Cullen's blog, The Write Spot for tons of prompts, discussions of the free-writing process and links to writing resources.

Here are the logistical details -- feel free to share this email with friends who might be interested in jump-starting their writing, too.
Jumpstart Petaluma  - Copperfield's, 140 Kentucky Street, Petaluma
Monday evening, 6:30 - 8:30 pm ~ Susan Bono leads the way in March - March 2, 9, 16, 24.
Tuesday morning, 10 - noon ~ with Lakin Khan ~ March 3, 10, 17, 25, 31 
Jumpstart San Rafael - Copperfield's, 850 Fourth St, San Rafael
Wednesdays, 4:30 - 6:30 p.m.   No meeting March 4th.  We'll continue with March 11, 18, 25 with Lakin Khan

onward and upward, writing all the while,
Lakin Willard Khan.